Teacher Comments

To show a better understanding of layout/page design I should have inlcuded a lot less white space, and by making the photos bigger (to take up whole page?- therefore, use a portrait picture) which will show that I can manipulate photographs appropriately to suit the presentation (magazine style). It was also mentioned that I should include more detail to my text and headings and that I should crop photos/frame a shot to include/exclude desired elements whilst considering mise-en-scene to show understanding of conventions of a magazine cover